Jabberwocky – Witness Statement

JAbberwocky 3You are the only person to have seen the elusive Jabberwocky lurking in the swamplands of Louisiana in the deep south of America. The FBI (Federal Bureau of Investigation) have asked you to describe what you saw of this creature and describe its distinguishing features.

Write a paragraph using the success criteria below:

  • Expanded noun phrases e.g. Sharp ridges that run along the length of its muscular back.
  • Parenthesis to include additional information.

Good luck. We can’t wait to read them!

Mr Proctor, Mrs Taylor & Mrs Tandy

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