BBC2 500 word challenge

Write a story of your own choice. It has to be no more than 500 words long. Happy writing year three!!

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  1. 0722013jh says:

    CEDRIC’S DRAGON

    Once upon a time there lived a young dragon called Jeffrey. His home was in a far far land away from where he could be seen. He lived in a big forest. He was 8 years old and very bored. So one day he decided to go and explore. He flew far from his home and landed where people could see him. People were very scared of him and ran away except for one boy named Cedric. Cedric liked Jeffrey because he could fly and was green which was his favourite colour. He climbed on Jeffrey and they flew to Jeffrey’s home. A tiger came hunting in the forest. He saw Cedric and wanted to eat him. Jeffrey breathed fire on the tiger and scared the tiger away from Cedric. The dragon flew Cedric back to his home and when the people saw that the dragon was Cedric’s friend and friendly they weren’t scared of him anymore.

    By Jessica H

  2. Lily C says:

    A Mermaid Adventure

    Down in the deep blue sea lived a beautiful mermaid called Lizzy. She has a fish friend named Joey and they went on an adventure. They found a ship wreck and Lizzy wanted to investigate.
    They went in and found a new mermaid and wanted to meet her. She was very scared though. Lizzy asked her what her name was. Her name was Sofia. Sofia found lots of things in the ship wreck including diamonds, gems, crowns and spoons and Lizzy was so happy because Sofia wanted to share her things with her. Lizzy and Sofia went to the surface and gave the things to a bird named Bob. They gave them to Bob because he knew all about everything in the deep blue sea. He has a book that he stole from a prince named Eric. It is about everything in the sea.
    One day Lizzy and Eric were swimming around and they bumped into each other, something weird happened! Their eyes flashed pink and they were instantly in love. They wanted to get married straight away. They arranged their wedding with their friends and family for a few days’ time.
    Lizzy was a beautiful bride and Sofia was her bridesmaid, Prince Eric was very handsome. They got married and lived happily ever after. The End.

  3. 072harrisn says:

    What a lovely story Lily. I love your use of commas in a list too!

  4. Grace Harmon says:

    The Superhero dog

    Once upon a time there was a dog who was called charlie and his owners were terrible they never gave charlie any food, drink, or any bed to sleep in for the night. So he kept on with being sad and he done his daily chores being hungry and being thirsty and then having to sleep on the dusty horrid floor and the mice and rats were out this night it was terrible for poor charlie. Although he may live in a house there was never any heat in the house.

    Somehow he was a clever dog and he was able to open windows doors and even the car and house keys so he was pretty clever. But this is really weird he has a lot of animal friends not like other animals like Mr Nibbles the rabbit and Jessie the cat and other very weird things like that, but even more weird he has a friend called whiskers and this will make you feel very weird he was a mouse and another called Bella and she was a rat.

    He loved his friends very much because he helped him with a lot of things Charlie couldn’t do and they even found some food for Charlie so they were very very nice animals. But he never wanted to tell his parents so every day when his owners went window cleaning they done this to earn some money but one day when they were out

    Charlie had a marvelous idea he would make some potion witch will turn them into a snake and keep them a snake for the rest of there lives. So the next day when his owners Jim and Kim went out of the house Charlie started to make his marvelous idea first what he done was he found a snake from his friends house and some rats and some slimy slugs and a lot of stinking powder to stink them out. So when Jim and Kim came back he looked normal but inside he was very happy he said to him self in his head “Only one week left till my magic comes to life!” So this is how it went for a week so Charlie was pretty exited for the big day. It felt like a dream come true to Charlie but his big brother who got all of the food and the beds and his room always got the heat so Charlie wanted to get some revenge on him.

    The big day came and Charlie was so happy that in the morning he almost burst! Quickly he ran down the stairs and put the snake potion into their morning drinks, even his brothers water and waited for the magic to begin. Then when they had turned into a snake, Charlie thought it would be good to save all of the poor dogs and bring them to his aunties house because she was very nice and gave him enough food and water and a nice bed.

    • 072harrisn says:

      Good use of inverted commas Grace to show the words which are spoken. I love your use of alliteration , slimy slugs! This gives extra impact.

  5. 0722013mf says:

    The Weather Kitten
    Once upon a kitten day, a small kitten called Kitty wondered of into a forest near by the sea .It was a boiling day so kitty went to the green forest trees who offered some shade for her. Suddenly, her paw touched something most peculiar which was blue. Kitty licked the blue peculiar heart thing which also tasted strange. In a flash, the sunny weather formed into a windy rainy weather.

    Kitty’s owner (a farmer called George) was upset because all of his crops were dying from this hot scorching week they had. George’s life was easy when he was little because he lived in he lived in Deoclation’s palace,but he ran away from his father Grumpus who was cruel and selfish. George was happy when the rain came beacause his crops were growing now,not drying up.

    Kitty licked it again but hard this time and the weather became hot and sunny again. This time she put her paw on it. For some reason, it started to snow gently.

    To be continued…

  6. 0722013mf says:

    The Weather Kitten
    Once upon a kitten day, a small kitten called Kitty wondered of into a forest near by the sea .It was a boiling day so Kitty went to the green forest trees who offered some shade for her. Suddenly, her paw touched something most peculiar which was blue. Kitty licked the blue peculiar heart thing which tasted strange. In a flash, the sunny weather formed into a windy rainy weather.

    Kitty’s owner (a farmer called George) was upset because all of his crops were dying from this hot scorching week they had. George’s life was easy when he was little because he lived in Deocletian’s palace,but he ran away from his father Grumpus who was cruel and selfish. George was happy when the rain came beacause his crops were growing now,not drying up.

    Kitty licked it again but hard this time and the weather became hot and sunny again. This time she put her paw on it. For some reason, it started to snow gently.

    To be continued…

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